Deserving of 100%
What an amazing track. I can't really find much to pick on here.
First think I can think of is that the intro was really well-done. I really like that you tried to incorporate percussion into such a techy track, you did it pretty good, but I really don't like the crash sounds, and the drum samples in general aren't the best for a track of this nature. Also wondering what's up with the sudden drop at about 0.55 and again after about a minute, and at 2.20?
Thinking of what this song was to be used to, it sounds really good. I can easily imagine this being in the background of a promotional video of sorts.
I see where you got the idea of air from, the melody is quite floating, relaxing. only thing keeping it from being a proper ambient track (IMO, of course, it's quite relative) is the fact that the rhythmics section is so powerful.
The fade-out, I'm not a big fan of, seems like a simple exit to a pretty nice piece.
Cheers
KAG