Shooter music
Not a bad loop. It loops very nicely.
It's very, very short, which means that these seven minutes can easily get really repetitive. It could work well with a fast-paced shooter game, but even then it'd have to be changed up a bit, I'm thinking about four rounds of this, then a switch up to something else.
Thanks I will keep that in mind.
Not too bad
It's not bad, but it's far too simple. It's basically just the one instrument throughout, sounds like a midi harp or something like that. The constant flow of notes could sound good, but it's a bit too long for it. Two minutes of constant flow of notes gets boring rather soon, unless it's absolutely amazing.
I'd say add some strings to it, to back up the harp. And don't try to make a 2-minute track with one instrument constantly churning out notes. It gets repetitive rather fast.
I made a shorter one but it's not as good. Really the best example of such a song is Solfeggio by Bach, and even that had sections with more than one note during the second half of the song.
Nice idea
I really like the idea, but I can't really see any attempt at a good composition here. it's rather a mashup of multiple sound effects from old school games.
If you could make an entire song basically only out of retro sound effects like this, that would be amazing, but this is just quite the mess. You did at least keep some sort of tact going.
Yeah it's just a little demo atm. I'm workin on making it much better. thanks for the input. :D
Far too shallow
Sounds more like a WIP IMO.
The track mainly consists of one synth and the drums at any one point. Sure enough the synths change around, but I don't see this as a proper dubstep song. It's very simple. I like the rhythmics you have in the intro, but the intro is waaay too long and dragged out.
I can't really hear the dubstep in this either, the synths not very wobbly and very few parts of the track remind me of dubstep whatsoever. Ending is also dragged out quite a bit.
In general this needs to be fleshed out, as it is now it's barely even a WIP.
This is PlaxXxebuss. Hai. Rasteezus and I have decided to remix another's song if it is bad to back it up. So expect something better within the next while.
Somewhat repetitive
It's not a bad track. Really relaxed and laidback, but there's def something missing.
Main problem for me is lack of variety. Yes, sure, there are synths that come in, transitions and the such, but the beat is mainly the sam throughout, and the synths don't vary much throughout.
This could do really good as backing for a vocal track, in hip-hop or rap, but as a standalone, it feels very naked and shallow, there's not much going on.
Yeah, i know what you mean, theres something missing but it also feels the need of something being taken out as well...
Lower the wobbles
I agree, this is not a bad starting point. I like that you're going for a more fast-paced dubstep, often they're real low pace. You might want to drop the wobbles a bit in pitch, it's a bit high right now.
And of course, add more to this. Maybe a drop before it, though that often coincides with lowering the tempo, so I'm not sure it'd fit.
Just listen to other dubstep and find out whether you want to make it dirty or fast-paced and energetic.
Cheers
KAG
I see.....
Since this was my first dub I was making a loop, but Ill definetly add this in the next song. I thought the wobbles were of high pitch XD. Thanks for telling me otherwise.
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Not the best audio quality
There seems to be some interference when you play chords higher in the scales on this track.
Other than that, I like the composition, with the chords and the constant bass notes. I think I heard a bend in there as well, which sounded pretty good, a nice addition to the cover.
Excellent ending as well, cut off at just the right time.
Cheers
KAG
No effort
I'm not sure what this is. Someone saying shit motherfucker looped and cut into pieces. It's not experimental, abstract, hip-hop or rap, it's more like spam, in my honest opinion. I'd love to see some more effort put into it. A beat, making it at least ten times longer, and proper lyrics.
Light and entertaining
I have a soft spot for any song that uses piano, especially when it's used this good.
Even though the piano is IMO the best part about the song, I love the somewhat muted synths that act as a backup for this piece, they're subtle, they're really all over the scale and frantic, really filling in any and all empty spaces in this track.
The synths int he middle of the track that somewhat sounds like strings are amazing. Not sure how I feel about the buzzy synth that comes in around 2.15, it's a bit powerful, but sounds great when it's accompanied by the other synths you've been using.
It's abit powerful during the outro too, but it fits pretty well in. It seems like you cut of the piano a bit short, you could probably end this song similarly, but with some delay on the piano to get that echo-effect.
A great track, I suggest you request reviews at the Review Request Club. You can find us on the BBS, under Clubs & Crews (:
Cheers
KAG of the Review Request Club
Thank you for reviewing the song so well. We will take it close to us and use it when we later are going to modify/update our song to the better. And while you already are here and are suggesting us to request reviews of you: Why don't you review our song F-king Piano in addition to this one?
Nice and easy loop
It's a nice, simple and easy loop. Nothing revolutionizing, but nothing too shabby either.
It's a bit generic and repetitive. There's not much variation in any way shape or form in the track. Apart from maybe the rhythmics, with a hi-hat disappearing somewhere in the middle of the loop.
The synth isn't bad, I like the synth that pans from left to right and back throughout the loop.
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