Soapbubble's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smile]

Could use some work

It's not a bad piece of art. Probably better than anything I could draw freehand, which is why I only draw in Paint.

You should probably do some work on the anatomy. The arms are different lengths, and she doesn't appear to have a chin, or feet. Not sure why the hair is see-through over her eyes?

The eyes are of different size, and the colors are a bit bland. You could maybe work on some shading, it's really not as hard as it sounds.

You could try adding a light source, and add some sort of "shine" to different parts of her. That alone could do wonders.

NekoMika responds:

Yea, it was rushed, was too lazy to equal them out too.

Eyes are slightly like that in real life actually, not sure why I did that with his hair.

Shading, lighting, all of which I shall try in the future.

Thanks for the review.

[Labirynth]

Dark

Like the artistic feel of this. Entire piece just feels dark and scary. The lonely person barely visible because of the shades. Nice.

navatika responds:

Thanks ;^!

[Ville Valo (HIM)]

Nicely don

It's very well done, excellent work on shading with only pencils. It looks very realistic. I'm not sure about whatevers coming out of his mouth though. I can't tell whether it's his tongue or smoke. If it's smoke, it shouldn't be so dense, should probably make it somewhat see-through.

Geodracula responds:

Ahh yeah, I meant to write that in my description actually. It's supposed to be smoke, but I just can't seem to get it to look like that... For some reason, it just ends up looking like a weird finger :S

Thank you for the review!! I will definitely return to this picture and (hopefully) improve the smoke :)

[SPAGHETTI!]

Clever idea

Looks like my friend last time I went to a dress-up party. Meatballs all over the place after a couple of hours.

I like the idea, and it looks pretty good. I love how the entire hair looks like spaghetti, I think you could've done more with the meatball sauce. And one of those meatballs look a bit like a rubber ball with the texture.

The eye is a bit weird, but other than that I like it. Especially the color schemes. Shading could be just a tad more detailed.

Oh, and that ear is really, really well done. I'm serious.

Shyfts responds:

Thanks!

[Mango Festival]

Oh man

I was expecting something wholly different when he said "big boned" right there. Shows what I've come to expect from Newgrounds over the years :P

Love the art style in this comic. The comic itself is also really good, funny as hell, and unexpected. Poor little guy getting bullied around.

Looking forward to read more of your cartoons (:

JWBalsley responds:

Thanks, don't worry Idgit will get his revenge! But I'm glad you're diggin' it!

Cheers!

[Nuke vs Solar]

Pretty cool

Love th ecolors you've used here. Looks prettyg reat in full size. I'd like to see more shading done though. Might be difficult with so many different light sources, but it practically adds a whole nother dimension to it if you can get it done properly.

Rennis5 responds:

yeah shading was a bitch with this one, i did do some shading to start off with then as i added more light it kind of disapeared,
and I thought I had killed it with all the green but i think the finished result is pretty good

[Costume Party]

Really original

You did a good job on this one, it's really original IMO.

The variety in costumes, the color schemes for each individual character, the details, must've been a lot of work during that week.

I'm not sure if there is some symbolism in this piece, but I like how it's all centered around the middle. Pulls the attention towards it. Very cool.

InsolentMinx responds:

glad you liked it, cheers for the review :)

[Skulls]

Detailed

Pretty amazed at this piece. The attention to detail is quite astonishing, I'm really liking it.

The shading is also really good, though I'm having somewhat of a hard time seeing the light source on the skulls.

Really cool.

MegaMelmo responds:

Thanks for the review! Now that I look at it, I see what you mean about the light source on the human's skull. Thanks!

[Raving Sperm Whale]

Oooh

I would love wearing something like that. Makes me want to go get myself a white t-shirt to draw on. Only thing I can see is a problem is the black outline, but I'm guessing that's because of the folds in the shirt.

I'd wear that. It's magical! Very simple, very cool.

And it's GLOW PAINT!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Yeah there isnt any black outline except for the whale ;)

Glow paint rules.

[Seedling]

Surreal, I love it

Absolutely love this piece. Colors you used look real good, and I love the idea of it. The roots coming out of the head look great. Like the lack of a background here and the somewhat simplistic style, looking apart from the tree.

Cheers
KAG

navatika responds:

Thanks for an in-depth and positive review!

Cheers
navatika