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[Custom Animated TF2 sprays]

Genius!

Oh man, it's just far too kewt.

I love the idea of simply turning all the classes into cats. I'd like to see them in different poses though, because this way you've really just re-colored the cats.

The animation is smooth though, and I like the different words on the different classes. Not sure if it's supposed to have that grainy look to it or not, but I don't really think it's necessary to have it.

Bobfleadip responds:

The grain is added since I'm trying to sell these and I don't want people to have the high quality for free lol

But thanks! I'll have different version up at some point in time!

[fistycuffs]

Nice style

I likre your very cartoony style, and is that Mindchamber?

Coloring is especially whack, such an acid trip just looking at this. The flying tobot looks badass, and the shading is simple, but very fitting for the style. I must say I love the background and the clouds. They remind me of candied floss or bubblegum. I want it in my mouth, at least.

UnderARock responds:

nope its not mindchamber, just a design that came to mind

[Pencil drawing of building]

A bit rushed?

A good piece alltogether, but there are some minor changes you should make.

First off, this is archietecture, and even though architecture might very lively and organic, the lines should be completely straight, which they aren't in all cases on this piece. It's not symmetrical either, and it the perspective is a bit messed up. I suppose the middle section is pushed out, not in, but it looks like it falls into the building at that part.

The shading on the facade is pretty impressive, but the lighting and shading on the top looks a bit off, and the strokes of the pencil are a bit too protruding on the rooftops.

I just feel you could've spent some more time on this one, to make sure it was 100% complete.

Treborre responds:

Hey thanks for the constructive criticism, this was one of my first serious pieces, at the first time in my life sat down with patience and spent a lot of time on this piece (well by my standards!)

Can't remember how long exactly maybe 6+ hours, this was my first technical drawing and had no idea on how to draw just relied on my natural talent I suppose. When I got to the end of this drawing I got annoyed about certain areas and was pressing to hard with the pencil that rubbing out would make the piece worse so I continued to complete it and left the roof to last, hence the light source is wrong on it as you pointed out.

As this was an early piece I won't make any changes as I can look back at it to remind me off the errors of my ways, I am human and hopefully realise in the future I am constantly improving :-)

[Fraggler]

Creative

Nice to see you try doing something abit different this time, you didn't do too bad, but there are some things you should look into.

The ground really doesn't look that good, it looks more like the ground in an older game, with really large textures. The creature itself is creatuve and cute, the eyes are really good, but the feet look a bit weird, hind feet being different to his front feet. His right front feet looks like it's a part of the nose.

The mushroom isn't too bad, but there is a weird black line on the bottom of it, and the dots look somewhat bad. It actually looks like the cap is 2D, while the rest is 3D.

Give yourself more time with your work and don't stop untill it's really finished, and I'm pretty sure that'd improve it a lot.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

okay, it was my first thing like this ive ever tried so im hoping i improve :)

[He means business!]

Not your best

I'm not sure you put as much work into this as some of your other pieces. This seems a bit rushed and not that detailed.

The best part is probably the eyes. The shine you made looks really good, even though his left eye seems to be loose in its socket.

The beard, I'm no fan of. It looks more like a brush tool that's been unevenly used on his chin. not sure what's going on under his nose either, or the lines under his nostrils.

The nose itself isn't too bad, but it looks a bit too edgy, considering it's 3D, and the jawline seems a bit off as well. The hair doesn't really fit in, as it's cartoon hair, you should probably try to make something work with the regular hair, instead of cartoon hair, even if it seems really hard to do.

The neck also seems a bit thin, seeing as it's slanted inwards towards the bottom.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

yeah, this isnt my best, but check out my newest piece :D

[How the Brain Works]

Cool concept

Love the idea you had for this one, I think it looks really cool. The puzzle pieces of the different parts of the body/head connected by wires to the brain, which in turn is connected to a battery. Really cool.

The lineart is a bit simple and I believe you could've put some more work into it, even though it looks really cool the way it is, with piercings, the pupil of the eye being yin yang, and the hand with many fingers. You should by the way work some more on the fingers on that hand.

I'd like some more shading work to make it look more realistic. A background color would be nice, and even coloring the piece itself could work out really well with the right colors used, the right palette.

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Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review!

[A friend]

Realistic

Really amazing how realistic this looks.

The lineart is perfect, and the coloring makes it look, well, realistic. The shading as well, on her face, looks great and really makes it look realistic, even more so than the coloring.

The detail on the flowers on the hat amaze me. Could maybe have added a background, but if this is a portrait, that would maybe just pull the attention away from the person, which isn't what you want.

data777 responds:

thanks you
i don't know about adding a background, i just think the work with no background.. that can disturb, i don't know.

I prefer like that

thanks man

[Mousy]

Works out well

Colors are fun and all, but in some cases, it doesn't really fit. This being one of them.

The image of this little boy, with traits of a mouse, really wouldn't be the same with colors. Right now it's somewhat sad, but cute. I really like the use of colors and the shading you did. The one source of light is really good.

Triggershock responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you think it looks good!

[Honey]

Damn

I like the idea of this picture. Mindless honeyzombies of sorts?

I like your style. Coloring on this one's pretty good. I especially like the shading around the eyes, brings out the idea that they're mindless. There could probably be a bit more shading on the characters though. It's nighttime, so there has to be a lightsource nearby, right?

Like how you did the lines and folds in the clothes. THat's nice attention to detail. Same goes for the ripples in the water.

TheAmused responds:

Haha, yes honeyzombies. They will feast upon your honeyhair.

Thank you, and yeah I did need to add more shading.