Soapbubble's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sadi and Zeppelin with Paledog]

Very cute

I like the cartoony style of the piece. It looks very cute.

I especially like your shading on this one. Your colors are pretty nice too, the palette you've used fits the style of the piece.

Looks like you forgot to fill in the eyes of the girl on the right, maybe?
I'd ask for something in the background as well. To fill in the blanks, if you wish.

nalem responds:

Nope. I didn't forget to fill her eyes. Zeppelin's eyes are just like that. They're filled with hatching.

EDIT: Aw man, how rude am I? Sorry I didn't do this sooner. Thank you for the nice comments! :)

[THE ROYAL WE]

... Wow.

This... I'm at a loss for words. Just... Wow.

You uploaded this to Newgrounds? It's amazing! The details, the colors, the depth, it is, in the proper meaning of the word, absolutely epic.

Favorited. Easily.

einharjar responds:

Thank you! :)

[Thor]

Great improvement

You werent kidding about this being better. It's a huge improvement.

I suggest you fullscreen it if you plan on reviewing it, by the way.

The hair does look a bit odd, mor elike grass or strands of thread just taped to his head, you might want to add that to the list of things you should work on.

There's not much shading here, but there seems to be some around the nose and eyes, which is pretty well done. Try to get some more shading in. The mouth looks pretty neat, I'm not sure what's up with the red spots in his eyes? And it seems like there's a thread going through his teeth, I'm not sure what that's about.

The hair does solve the problem of edges, though, so that's a pretty good thing.

I also like that you decided to finally add some background. The gradiant is nice, and I like that you've written "THOR" in the back as well.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

the stich thing is a problem needing fixing (im looking into it) and thanks for the epic reviews :D

[Metal God]

Interesting

I like the piece, even though I'm no Judas Priest fan (I googled his name).

I found some pictures for reference, and I have to say I like your somewhat parodical piece on him. His head does have a pretty odd shape, yes.

best part about this is without a doubt the lighting and shading you've done. It's very skillfully drawn, especially with all the folds in the leather jacket, there's a lot to take care of when it comes to shading.

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Merol responds:

THANK YOU A LOT!
Heh, yeah, I don't know if a caricature counts as a parody. Still I think i could have exagerated it a little more :/

[Explore]

I love it

Apart from the mouth, this is an amazing piece, I really, really like it.

Sure, she might lack half her body, and this does look like a sketch, but I like it enough to favorite it. I just really like the sketchy style on this one. i think it looks better than if you were to finish it and shade it proper and such.

Favorited
5/5

Rhunyc responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the kind words and favorite!

[InCiNeRaTe!!!]

Looks pretty badass

Love the style. The colors look pretty cool, but I'm pretty much certain it would look better if you'd done it in spray paint.

I did like how you wrote out the word, with the letters connected to eachother. Could done some shading too, that would probably make it look real cool.

Flashmovieboy responds:

I'm glad you liked this piece, gonna try more shadowing next time for sure :)

[Put on Your Loser Face]

Okay shading

I'd like to see some better shading here. It's hard to tell where the lightsource is, so some more prominent shading would be nice.

It's also very smooth, could do with some more textures on the sking. The hand is okay, but something about it is off. I'd like a proper background too, seeing as you already do have something in the back.

RexAwix responds:

Thanks for the critique. I did notice everything you mentioned, and I'm surprised you were able to pick out everything I felt was unfinished or rushed. To be honest I kind of gave up on this piece because the friend I was doing it for never accepted the first sketch and so I halfheartedly finished it. Again, thanks for the helpful critique.

[spike ride]

Neat

I absolutely do like it, it's very well done. Very neat, very simple and easy.

The coloring is wel done, but I'd like som more textures. Everything is just that sleek right now, smoother than a baby's bottom.

A background would be nice too.

emukid responds:

thankyou and baww man i do need to work on textures, i just enjoy shiny :D

haha i suck at backgrounds but it would look nice your right, i think this just took so long i just gave it a ...boring background, i didn't want it to take away the detail in the image.

[SkyBlu Redfoo!]

Oh God

I really can't stand LMFAO, oh god.

The pixel art here is pretty damn neatly done. I really like your shading, that's often somewhat difficult to make look good. Also like the detail on the outfits aand the way you did the brunette dude's hair.

And of course, the mario's don't make it worse, though the feet look a bit weird.

DarkArtisan responds:

I hate feet lol :) Thanks for the feed back. <3

[Not handsome enough to tempt.]

Needs practice

It's not a bad piece, but there are some things you should practice on.

Most importantly, the shape of his head. It looks extremely large. I guess that is because you're trying to do this portrait with the character having his head turned just a tad. The neck is also very, very large, it looks like his neck is as big as his head, basically.

You should also do some work on the shading. It's not very good as is, shading should be more gradual instead of having a hard line where it's shaded.

IloveNantes responds:

Hmm, alright. Although I'd have to say that I copied the shading exactly as it was from the Pride and Prejudice's first episode. But you're right because I added in the additional values myself. Also, there were originally some shading everywhere but the scanner zapped that. :/

And his neck is a bit thinner than that, he has a whole lot of fabric wrapped around it, I think that was in the reference I used. You won't be able to find the exact picture, I don't think, because I have the DVD and paused it to work on the piece. I would zoom in every few minutes to stop the DVD from resetting.

Thanks for the review. I think that the skull is large, too, and I finally 100% noticed it when you said so. I had already thought something was wrong with it. Again, thanks for the review. Every bit counts.