Looks like great practice
Hello again!
You truly seem to be improving, but the main issue is still the same, the fact that the head has some unnatural sharp edges. It really throws of the realism.
You did the eyes well on this one, but I think you should do something about the monocle, if that's what it is. It's the same color as the background, whereas I'm pretty sure it should be see-through. The eyes other than that look good, though you might want to work on adding eyebrows.
Not sure about the ear, but I liked the moustache. It suits the style you're going for. Ear on the other hand looks very unnatural and out-of-place.
THe lighting is also somewhat off, giving the head a glossy look, whichseems quite unnatural.
You should probably be focusing on the lighting in your next piece, make it look natural, and with the shading. That actually adds a whole lot to a piece like this.
Cheers
KAG of the Review Request Club