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[Gavin A - That Sound]

Quite repetitive and somewhat unoriginal

It's not a bad song, it's not that, it could've been a great song if you shaved off two minutes.

I don't want you to think I simply punish you for making long songs. Long song doesn't especially mean bad, but it's very hard to create a long song that doesn't get repetitive, and sadly, this one does get repetitive rather soon.

For the first couple of minutes it's a pretty okay track, it's not really anything new, but it's a good track. After that, it just gets boring due to the highly repetitive nature of the track, and lack of variation. You could vary the bassline and melody on the last parts of the track, and the rhythms.

Also, it could do with some voices over it. Nothing big, but a sensual female voice would do good.

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[FILTHY]

Quite nasty indeed

Not a bad dubstep at all, one of the better I've heard on NG.

The intro wasn't too awesome. I really didn't like the snare, be it the volume or the sample you used. Up to the drop, it wasn't too much of a good song, rather simple.

The countdown before the drop was a neat addition, and the buildup really worked out awesomely. The bass used in the drop was nasty, you did well on it. A lot of people just think they have to throw a buzz on it and lower it, and they'll have a dubstep track. You're not one of them. That being said, there is some work that could be done, mostly fine-tuning, as well as the drums which could use some variation.

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superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks for the review!!!

[[dB] Sitting on the Pavement]

Quite... soothing?

I think it's a very good song, and after reading the author's comment, I want to say you did a pretty good job with the theme of the song.

The wind in the background felt a bit out-of-place, because the melody and the animal sounds you used made it sound like a clear summer day.

The drums are very repetitive, but the beat and pace is pretty much okay. If you could only have some more variation with regards to it. There were also some parts where the piano felt a bit out of tune.

And it doesn't really feel lonely, rather cheerful and happy.

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Decibel responds:

Thank you for the feedback, I will get to work after the NGADM!

[Midnight Rush (Kuyrayami Mix)]

Quite random

I must say, it's not a very bad track, but it isn't very consistent.

The intro doesn't really fit with the rest of the song, at least not too well. Sure, the piano returns, but the intro makes it sound ilke it will be a slow-paced harmonic song.

The drums get very repetitive after some time, as they change up very little. The same can't be said for the melody, which varies and changes enough to be entertaining throughout the song.

The guitar sound isn't too good, and I have to say I'm not too fond of it. The melody it plays isn't bad, it's just the samples that aren't exactly prime.

I would like to hear it with some better samples, but I really liked the piano melody. You should use that as a base and build a song completely around that. Could have some real potential right there.

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Hikigane responds:

I don't have much to say to that, aside from the fact that I will definitely take into account everything you just said. I especially like the idea of using the piano as the base for a completely different song. Thanks much!

[among the championcast-TTC CHG]

Amazing composition.

It's a great composition, but I can't say it fits too well with your story.

The introduction is a bit messy at times, but this actually could fit with the story. The main character is confused, and meets this huge group of armed personell.

Sure, the story fits the song, but in the same way the last piece I reviewed by you. As a general theme song, this song works, but it doesn't tell a story the same way, not as literal.

Other than those two complaints, I have nothing bad to say about this. Again, I'm looking forward to see you chip in on the Litterature Portal whenever it comes around, and reviewing your next piece. I'm starting to get into the story as well now.

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Calamaistr responds:

As said before you're always welcome to freely review the rest of the album anytime you want.

Not all tracks are as heavy on the story in the sense that they follow a 'happening scene by scene, a few tracks are moreof themes of individual characters or locations aswell. :)

[Machine Room]

Good loop, not so good song.

I'm glad you marked this as a loop.

It has this dark, frightening feel to it throughout the entire track. It would fit well in a game, but not any game. Something dark and violent, yes. It would work out very well. Due to the short pause you've added at the end, it doesn't loop too well, though.

Even though it's a loop it has to try not to be repetitive, and even though you do switch it up from time to time, it gets somewhat repetitive after a short while. Might be due to lack of variation in the rhythmic section. Experiment a bit with it!

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Cimba responds:

Newgrounds inserts the silence at the end automatically

[_/Move For Me\_ [SS Rmx]]

Awesome track!

Absolutely a very entertaining track. I haven't heard the original, so my review will be based on this being an original.

Being that it's such a long song (at least after NG standards), it often gets really hard to keep it original throughout the entire song and not make it repeat itself, while still making it sound like one song and not multiple songs smashed together.

Now, why do I write this? Because you managed to avoid all that. This is a great song that lasts a full six minutes (and one second), without growing boring.

The bassline throughout the song backed up the main melody very well, be it the one tune or the a capella, it never sounds meager or slimmed down. It doesn't really get boring either, thought it doesn't really change a lot. The sounds used to compose the bassline change up quite often, if you get what I mean. Might be a bad way of putting things.

The acapella you downloaded also sounds really great, implemented into the song,m or vice-versa. Melody was catchy, and easy to listen to.

The absolute intro, with the clash was a bit cheesy, but other than that I can't really complain. The outro wasn't too bad, but maybe a bit dragged out, seeing as it doesn't change up at all. Then again, I'm pretty sure it'd feel naked if it weren't there.

Would be fun to see the first version of the song, as I see you've done some edits later on.

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ShootingStar responds:

Wow :D I'm so glad you liked it so much, and thanks for the well structured review! Hard to get those now-a-days :D
Thanks so much for the review!! :D I appreciate it sooo much ;)

ShootingStar

[No Words (Sky High Edit)]

Very nice tune

Not too sure of the genre myself, but that doesn't really matter right now.

What a great track. Feels pretty happy, at least that's my impression of it. Either way, it's a fun tune with loads of variation.

Melodically it's not a very technically challenging song. It's rather simple, and just varied enough to keep people entertained and listening throughout the song. I really like the way the tune breaks down at some parts.

The rhythms might be a little simple, but they too change up somewhat, so it really isn't too bad.

The buzzy bass got kind of annoying after some time, though. It was just the same rhythm throughout the entire song, which felt very repetitive after some time. Also, you took the easy way out on the ending of the song, with a simple fading out, which I'm no fan of.

Also, I guess I should say I didn't listen to the original before I listened to this, as I wanted to review it as a single piece. I'm sure my impression would be somewhat different if I had done so.

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aryst0krat responds:

Hey, great review! Thanks! If we ever re-work this tune, we'll keep what you said in mind, especially with the bass and the ending. :)

As for the original, I tend to think of them as two separate songs, so it's no big deal.

[Rough Edge]

Highly repetitive

There is very little that goes on in this song, and seeing as it's marked as techno, I'll review it according to that.

It's a rather short tune, and it shouldn't be too hard to make it varied and somewhat original. The problem with this short song is that you don't really have any variation. It's really the same thing throughout the entire song.

I think it's categorized wrong when it comes to genre. If it were placed under ambient, it could've been a pretty neat track, that could fit in the background of a dark or disturbing flash.

Work more on variation, unless you want to switch into ambient. Don't think you can just drop variation when going ambien, but keeping it exciting isn't as vital with ambient as with techno/trance.

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[SN | You Dun Goofed! Hardstyle]

Pretty generic parody-song.

For a fun parody-song, the likes of "THIS IS SPARTA", this one does the job. /b/ would probably be proud.

Everything about this track is very generic and unoriginal. Normally it would be a 6/10 on a track like this, but as I did laugh a bit at it, I'll kick it up a lil notch, to 7/10.

One thing that really annoyed me was the lack of variation with regards to samples used fromt he videos. There are multiple funny quotes from the vids of her whining. You dun goofed. Consequences will never be the same. Brain slushee. It would be great if you used different quotes.

With the melodies, it's not too varied either. You should try to simply change everything up a bit, because it sounds very generic.

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SessileNomad responds:

ur a meanie