meh.
It did have some potential. I mean, your drawing is pretty good, and the monologue isn't too bad, and the jumping animation is not bad either.
If this was Clock Day, it would be considered a good flash, but seeing as Clock Day had been over for three hours when you submitted this, it wasn't.
Could've at least added a tiny stop();
Actually for me it was uploaded 3 minutes late.
It would have had more if I didn't have to watch my shows.
Sorry.
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A lot of work went into the making of this.
Okay test.
It's not bad, but it's far too short, and tests don't really belong on Newgrounds.
Your new tablet seems to be working just fine. The graphics are really simple, not in a bad way, and the animations are smooth. It lacks a background, though, which gives it a very rushed feel. Might want to do something about that. It doesn't even have to be something too detailed, just something other than a a bland coloured sheet.
It's very short, which you explain by saying it's a test. That's okay, but tests don't really need to be uploaded to Newgrounds. I get that you want to get reviews on it to see if people like your style, but then you should probably delete this one again later on.
The story itself is amusing, but very short. I'm not really sure how it could be any longer, but I guess you could make it overly dramatic, with a fire-funeral, a fire-childhood and his entire life behind him, and then he dies because he cries. I don't know, just throwing some ideas.
Song was great, and sfx was pretty good, though maybe not completely in sync. That's just nitpicking, of course.
All in all, I can't give this more than 4, simply because it's a test, and it's so short. However, seeing what you can do, I know you can make some pretty awesome movies in the near future.
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yay i can make awesome movies :D
Moar absurdity!
Not bad at all. I like the absurdity, though I don't think you take it all out.
Graphically speaking, this is nothing to cheer for. Seems like you've only used line and circle tools, or similar tools, except for on a few drawings. It's not necessarily a bad thing, but the graphics are absolutely not great. The backgrounds, however, seem pretty well done, and I like that you put time into making them. That itself improves the flash a lot.
Story... well, it's supposed to be an absurd flash, isn't it? Which means the story should be thin. Just like Arfenhouse. However, I feel you could easily take this a bit further, with the absurdity, I mean. Random things happening, like the car flying around in the first scene, stuff like that. There were some moments where it actually seemed to be a regular, boring flash.
I don't have much to say on the audio. It could absolutely benefit from having voice actors, if they managed to make good voices, that is. If you can't find any, stick to speakonia, as it doesn't do any harm to the flash.
It's not bad, but it's not like Arfenhouse. With some improvements, it can be a great absurd flash.
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Confusing all right.
I don't really know John Madden, so I don't quite get the joke, but I can still review this. Right? Right.
It's very simple, that much I can say. There's little animation in here, except for the lines and the five-or-so pictures of Madden you've thrown together to make him look overly excited. Which he does. I guess that's what you were going for, as I'm guessing he's one of those overly enthusiastic kind of guys.
Even though I didn't really get it, I did find it somewhat funny, because I can somewhat recognize it from Norwegian commentators during whatever winter sport's on.
I did think you dragged it out a bit, maybe a bit too much of the good stuff. Could easily be shorter.
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Hmmm. I recommend you watching a few things about John Madden first.
So kewt! =3
Flashes like this are a rare breed on NG. It's just too kewt!
The graphics are very simple, and not very detailed, which is one of the main reasons it's so cute. The animations are really smooth, and the colours used are very soft, easy on the eyes.
There's not much story to it, and it's very short, which sucks. I'd love to see a somewhat longer version of this, even though the shortness adds to the kewtness, I suppose. I'd still like to see it a few seconds longer, or this turned into a series of short shorts. That could absolutely work out, as long as you keep this easy, sweet feel.
The audio was also very soothing, and added to the sweetness. It's a simple loop that really doesn't feel repetitive, at least not till you've had it on in the background for a while. Which I did, as I reviewed the piece.
Other than that there's not much to say. It's original, and sweet, and the audio is spot on, but it's very short, and leaves the viewer somewhat in the dark, not knowing what this was all about.
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Vintage?
Four years has passed, already. Wow.
Not a bad flash. It's long and entertaining. There are some quite major flaws though.
The animation was okay, taken into consideration that this was in '06. The drawings were simple, and some of the crops were really bad. It could be funny, but it just looks pretty poor.
The audio was okay, the speakonia wasn't too easy to understand as it went so far, but I guess that might just be me not speaking English as my first language.
The punchline at the end was a bit funny, mainly because of the short break right there.
There are some flaws, like simple drawings, poor shading and cropping, as well as the audio. These shouldn't be too hard to correct.
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Poorly done.
I know you can do better than this.
The only thing saving this movie is that it's a little funny. Other than that, it doesn't have many positive qualities.
you didn't really do anything here yourself, except for the tweaking, explosion and talking arrow. The crops were at least pretty okay, but no better.
It was at least a bit funny, but I'm quite notorious for really bad humour, so that's probably me being lame. Audio, not much to say. The speakonia voice was easily understandable, and the music fit to the parody of Space Jam, Caddy Jam.
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Ehe.
NG will never have enough floppay dicks.
FiveStar - flashy and colourful!
RetroSmash - Nixony!
Adam-Ant - Dirtbikey!
Should've had some more variation, sound-wise.
NO that's the POINT
Boring menu
What happened to the music and fun menus?
FourStar - We don't have that gameshow in Norway.
Pube Jahken - I don't like dogs.
Coolboyman - D for Effort.
Pube Jahken 2 - Still don't like dogs.
I like it when people call me bro.
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