Not bad, but poor recording
Sounds ilke you guys could make some pretty neat tracks. I'd like to hear more. Recorded properly, that is.
The main issue I have is the poor production quality. If this were a punk song, that could be okay, but it isn't, and even then, this recording isn't very... punky. It's not messy, and it's not the lo-fi quality, it's simply recorded using lousy equipment, it sounds. And that really bothers me because I can't really make out the vocalist at all, and it might have distorted the sounds of the instruments.
Anyway:
The vocalist at times sounds like he's gagging, to get the words out. I'm not sure how to explain it properly, but he needs to get some more flow to it. The drums are somewhat boring, but at least they're well played.
The guitar solo at 1.30 (or something), sounds really simple, and somewhat out of tune. The entire song feels very repetitive towards the end, but the ending is pretty good. I like that you didn't cut off the chatter at the end, it adds something to the song.
If you could either re-record this with proper tools, or record some new songs in a studio, that'd be great.
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