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[Jam Buddy Cminor Shuffle]

Very repetitive.

Loops aren't really that easy to make. Just because they're short doesn't mean they can just be the same. This particular track is very repetitive, and it doesn't even loop very well, because of the three-second pause you added at the end. It sort of broke up the loop and made it sound like a sample being played over and over.

In general, everything about this song is VERY repetitive, as it's just the same over and over. Try to experiment more, especially with the bass, which can be a lot more groovy than this.

The song has some groove to it, which isn't too bad, but again, the break ruins the loop.

experimentg responds:

I know about the break, I'm trying to fix it...fean du er norsk du!

Pausa var ikke i den fila jeg spilte etter, så jeg aner ikke hvordan den havnet der. skal se å få det fiksa

[.:Horror in the Playhouse:.]

Not so much horror

But a very majestic and somewhat eerie song. This could quite easily fit into... something a la THe Nightmare Before Christmas and Plants vs. Zombies.

It sounds a lot like the theme song to a funfair of doom. Like un-dead clowns and such. The climax felt very majestic, but the drums used were a bit generic, not the best samples.

camoshark responds:

Thanks for the review!

Yeah, it was supposed to evolve into something much darker, but I decided rather to make it eerie, yet not really scary.

Those two examples represent pretty much what I was aiming, showing that I pretty much got the hang of it!

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert

[Lifeline [LK]]

Absolutely not bad.

Considering this was done with only a demo version of FL, I have to give you some extra cred. That version is very limited.

Some of the problems can obviously be blamed on the fact that you're using a demo-FL. When these points are taken out, there's really not much to say about this, as the main problems I have with the song, the reason I'm taking some points of the score, could easily be fixed in a full version of FL, and I know you could easily do that yourself.

The first part of the song might be a bit slow, and the change to the drastic second part of the song is quite sudden, but this might just be my taste. The outro was okay, but not too special. I guess that too could've been fixed in the full version.

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LightKeeper responds:

I don't think it's as much a problem with me using a demo because I use a separate program to write everything out as a midi file first which I then import to FL. Really I agree with you. There's probably a lot more I could have done compositionally with this song that I just wasn't thinking of when I put it all together. I can't save all the mixing though so if I was to add on to this it'd be another 13 hours project and I'm vastly satisfied with this file already.

[Teh Danger Song]

Un-eventful

It's a pretty good track, but it has a couple flaws you should do something about.

FIrst off, it never felt like the song actually climaxed anywhere. It had an even beat throughout the entire song, a quite typical DnB beat, somewhat energetic but not necessarily fast-pace, and it had these synths with echo and bass that went throughout. Again, nothing very exciting, but still a good DnB.

The melody was also okay. The biggest problem I have with the song is the very repetitive nature of the song, even though it doesn't really repeat itself a lot. The problem lies in the fact that you barely use any different synths, and the rhythmic section really stays on the same track, with changes during bridges and such.

Don't be afraid to experiment with DnB, there's so much you can do. It's not a bad track, it's just that it isn't anything special either.

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MobiusIII responds:

Thanks for another thoughtful review! The song started life more as doodling of sorts, not intended to be put on NG. I agree with your points however, especially with the percussion. Next DnB song I make will be more 'eventful' I hope!

[Once Profound]

I'm amazed

You truly impressed me with this one.

The dirty bassline that goes through the entire song, with variations throughout, the change of instruments throughout the song, the rhythmic section, the melody, the huge register you've used so perfectly, I am absolutely and completely amazed.

Not once does this get boring. Not once do I feel like turning it off to listen to something else. It's a great track, very entertaining, varied and original. I don't really have much more to say on it. Sounds really dirty.

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Kirbyfemur responds:

Man i though this song was going to end up a flop, but this is kind of nice to see people are liking it so far. =3

[In a nutshell - TTC CHG]

You continue to amaze me.

Man, this song is so different if you listen to it without reading. Either way, it's an amazing track.

The song has a very relaxing feel to it. It feels refreshing, like I can lay back and not worry about anythin. Everything's okay, and everything will stay that way. The song itself doesn't really tell a story, unlike some of your others, but it really works very well with the story you've written. Even how it sounds a bit annoyed towards the end, when the two have been looking for this gate, but can't find it, and no-one seems to know of it.

Seeing as this is somewhat of an ambient piece, it doesn't need any high-points, a climax, something like that. It also loops very well. The outro could just as well be an intro.

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Calamaistr responds:

thanks, i like it when people really listen to my music well. :)

[.:Unsquare:.]

Something new.

It's a pretty fun track, and it's something new, a nice change from techno and trance, which is what almost everything requested is.

The entire song has a very cheerful feel to it. I think it's the light midi keyboard that does it. There are no, or at least few, heavy, long notes, and the rhythm is quite fast-paced, though never feeling rushed.

The audio quality sounds very good, considering it's MIDI; even though I'm no fan of MIDI. I also liked the outro. The slow-down was something different, as most songs have a really cheap fade-out. My main problem is the very repetitive nature of the song. Even though it has some parts where the melody change a lot, it still gets very repetitive, with not very much change in the rhythm and the melody being pretty much the same, save the refrains.

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camoshark responds:

Thanks for the review, they help me alot!

Funny you say it doesn't feel rushed, because I actually find it to sound like a song of the band Rush! Be aware, I am no fan of MIDI either, but considering my current budget, I'll have to leave it at that...

Check the other responses from the other reviews for further info.

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert

[You Just Move]

lo-fi?

Very groovy, but could absolutely benefit from better sound quality.

The beats are quite simple, with some variation throughout the song, though nothing major going on at any point. I really liked the melody that came in, as it put the jazz in this song, absolutely. The bass track also sounded really neat, also groovy.

My main problems are that the quality is low. It sounds like you recorded it in a really poorly isolated room, and I'm standing outside. Or something like that. I guess I can agree with Fro and his bucket-thing.
The second thing is that it's far too short. I barely managed to get my groove on, before the song ended. ):

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spartacusxerox responds:

thx soap, much appreciated feedback. Not much that I haven't heard already, but that shows the power of the RRC in action, you being the most consistent :D

You are also right with the song length and I thank you for that comment. I like seeing someone consistent on the charts... it's a real good sign

Thanks again, soap, hope to see u around.

-SpXer-

[Apathy]

Don't technofy it.

I really liked the simple feel of the entire song. Whatever you do, don't technofy it. Sure, it might gain you some more fans, but you don't want them as fans.

I love the simple feel to the song. I especially find that little drum in the back, the kick and the hi-hat, very... charming =3

The piano melody is simple, easy to follow, and still entertaining. The song is just varied enough to keep me listening and enjoying throughout the song.

I didn't care much for the part at about 2.20, I think. You switched out the piano in favour of something... else? I missed the piano, but at least it kept the song going and varied it enough.

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MonkeyV responds:

Thanks for the review :3

Yeah, I would never technofy this. I love it just how it is. I mean, the prospect of becoming more well known is cool, but the joy wouldn't last long when all of my fans want more techno =/ I'll probably do some techno at some point (I have before, after all) but I'm not going to do it to this.

Ah yeah, the chiptune percussion. So glad I made that decision ^_^ And I notice if you listen really hard to the duity/noise on the kick, it sounds very sad for some reason.

About that thing at 2:20. Yeah... I suppose switching the piano out for... that, wouldn't have been a 'popular' choice. Nevertheless, when I planned this song out in the shower an hour before I started work on it, I told myself that if nothing else, it would have three things: Lots of piano, chiptune percussion, and backwards MIDI trumpets.

Anyhow, thanks very much for the review.

(Also: I am still amazed at the fact that this title hasn't already been taken)

[ThePigeonMaster's Theme]

Oh god

Holy crap, you're incredible.

That's what an eargasm feels like. I think. I'm pretty sure I just had one. I love the combination of the scratching and rock, as well as those vocal samples. Especially sounded awesome in the bit slower part.

The guitar part... oh my god how awesome. And I was absolutely amazed at how well it looped. Towards the end I was thinking that "this can't loop well at all", but it sounded absolutely flawless. Great stuff

ThePigeonMaster should be forever grateful for this.

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Sonofkirk responds:

How cool to give eargasms to people :P. I was actually kinda surprised to see how well the scratching samples fitted the song. I used only two samples, but I reversed them both so I ended up with 4 scratching sounds, that's tricky but it sounds awesome! Nice to see that people doesn't notice it doesn't loop so perfectly, I guess it works fine this way :).

Thanks for the review dude, feels ggood to be reviewed by my old rrc fellows :)