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[A song about lag!]

Eh, no

This might just be the oldest trick in the book of flash jokes. A fake loading screen never works out. It's been done multiple times before. You should try putting more effort into your work, and actually animate something with a story to it. Add a story, and sound, a proper story.

This is not really even remotely funny.

snowbodys responds:

eh, yah well it has a good nuff rating

[teh lady,old man,&cookie]

All right

Not a bad attempt at flash, considering it's only your 3rd proper flash.

Main problem for me isn't necessarily the bad graphics, but the lack of voice acting, which I'd love to hear. The writing looks out of place, and really ruins the flow of the flash.

In addition to that, of course, there's the graphics, which you need to improve on. Same goes for animations, really, you're using a lot of tweening, which looks very unnatural when it comes to humans moving.

JKSSN responds:

Bad graphics - Yup!!! It sucks!
Too much tweening - I'm too lazy using FBF :P
Voice acting - I'm homeschool and don't have a lot of friends.
Needs a lot improvement huh?
Anyway, I made a new flash, very short and because I'm bored, and first time doing lip-syc. Pls review and tell me what you think! :)

[ToastedToastyToast 1942]

Confused

I honestly have no idea what just happened.

I guess this should tell the story of ToastedToastyToast's origin, but it really doesn't. The swap between TTT and Hitler gives off no explanation, and I have no idea what "The Fags" are doing in here. Seems very random to me. Flash is also very short, and if you're telling the story of TTT's origins, you should think of making it longer.

The filter and audio is pretty neat, though the audio doesn't fit the time period you've set this in, 1942. The grainy look on the flash is pretty neat.

Review Request Club

[Enter ToastyToastedToast]

Uhm

Well, you get points for the story, but there are some issues I'm having with this.

First off, the graphics are poor and it looks like you didn't really put much effort into this. Apart from the different paintings, which in turn were replaced with other paintings, everything looked very rushed, and looked like it was drawn in less than a minute, by hand with a mouse.

Sure enough the idea was funny, and I was actuallyl settling in for a pretty cool flash, as I've seen some of your other stuff before and enjoyed it thoroughly, but I was rather disappointed when I saw the graphics.

It's also way too short, and it really doesn't tell a story at all, definitely not the story of ToastedToastyToast's life.

Points for humour and sound, though, that music was pretty badass.

Review Request Club

[ClockDay 2011]

Well

Points for originality, though this appears to be a mathematically/technically incorrect representation of 10 Years of B.

But really, it could do with something more, you're not the only one that did a 0.# KB flash with B and 10 in it for Clock Day.

[10 YEARS OF B <3]

Uhm

I have a feeling more effort went into adding co-authors than to actually making the flash on this one.

Oh well, it's Clock Day, what can you do. Would've been nice if the text didn't shift so fast, though. And some background music.

[Clock Crew Flash]

Well

At least there's some effort put into this. I guess. I mean, there are some animations, and the voicing, I assume you've recorded that yourself, added that shit to the voice. Background music is fine. Loud noise at the end hurt my ears. Could do with a preloader and a replay button, though, as it just loops forever right now.

[Creature Contact]

Neat style

I like your animating style, as well as your drawing style. It goes well with the story you're telling.

The style's got a comic feel over it, and feels like it shouldn't be taken too serious, which I like. The music helped bring out the atmosphere in the track. To me, the story of the piece is a bit abstract, and I'm not entirely following it, but from the author comments, I'm guessing you wanted to go for something a bit experimental, trying out new things, which worked out well with the skyspaces, for example.

Sure enough the flash could've done with some more detail, in general, but I'm not too sure if that would fit your somewhat simplistic style.

Review Request Club

[The Sugar Claws: V-VII]

Still love the style

There's not a lot that differs in terms of quality from chapter to chapter. It doesn't really need to.

I've been reading and reviewing a lot of your stuff, and I really think that you've done a seriously amazing job with the storyline, plot and general feel of this story. The atmosphere the story itself is placed in, is created around the reader by use of music and your pretty distinct art style.

There's not much animation, but the graphics are neat and unique. The color palette you used really gets out the contrasts in the story. The music still doesn't loop perfectly, but the sound itself is pretty good.

Review Request Club

Celx-Requin responds:

Cool,
I hope you will drop in for the last release in October!

Thanks,
- Celx

[The End Of the World?]

Chuckles

You've got some skill in animation, but there are some issues.

For one, you haven't got a preloader or a replay button, and the whole thing loops, which makes the entire flash feel like it was made by a complete amateur. Your style isn't too bad, it's simple but the animation is very smooth. The jokes I've seen from you so far are pretty funny, but ruined by pretty half-assed voice-acting. The microphone isn't too good and the voice-actor is somewhat unenthusiastic. You should probably look into a new voice-actor.

Cheetoh responds:

This is originally an avi video that I converted to swf. It was usually for youtube, so when I converted it, I didn't know how to put the preloader in.