Sweet
I prefer the style of the zombie-like deer, or whatever it is. Love the cloring done with the pencils, love the depth of it.
On the other hand, I like the style of the one on the right as well, a bit more comedic, like the coloring and shading, and the design, of course.
Get a scanner :P
No, but really, you should get a scanner, because the quality on this one is really harmed by the fact that this seems to have been taken with a regular camera.
Either way, looks like a cat fused with a bat and Cyclops. Terrifying, IMO. The lineart is pretty good, the ears and wings look like they are different sizes though, want to check in on that. There are some lines from the sketching that should've been erased completely, and there is a slight lack of texture to the head. I suppose it's a hairy face, so there should be some more lines to it.
It sure is original, crossing creatures like this is something people don't do often enough. The result can be pretty hilarious. You could also try coloring it in. You've used a pencil to color in here, which is well done. I also like that you've done some shading on the ears.
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Yea, I took this with a cam. I do have a printer scanner but the thing has not worked in years and I actually do plan to buy a scanner/printer very soon so I can upload other art pieces I have done.
Well I looked up something entirely random in middle school and came across that thing. I decided I would draw it as close as I could, the ears and wings did not go as well as planned. Guess I could do a second version of this with colors adding more life to it as well too I guess.
Yea, I guess it could be original. Thanks a plenty for the review though, appreciate it. :-)
Well drawn, but very unrealistic
It's a really well-drawn piece, you seem to have some knowledge of anatomy of this style.
I'm really enjoying the coloring and shading on this piece. The shading has multiple gradients, as do the colors. You've also added in lighting, which looks fairly good, and the facial construction is also good. Even the fingers you've made look good, and I know a lot of people have big problems with that.
The background is all right, abstract, I don't know if it's just there to fill in or something else, but it looks good nonetheless, and makes sure the picture doesn't look boring.
My issue is the hard edges and lines, and the fact that there is absolutely no texture to the body. It looks good, but it looks far too plain, and very unrealistic. I'm aware you didn't go for a realistic feel with this piece, it is after all in a style inspired by Japanese/Korean drawings, but even the drawings in such styles have characters that are somewhat flawed.
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i must thank mega-supreme for the anatomy.
i'm not sure what you mean about not having texture on the body.
i explained about the background in coops review,
as for the hard edges i did do another version of this with no line art but it dosn't really look all that good, maybe with a bit more work it would put this one to shame.
I would not say that those characters are flawed because art is whatever you want to make it and exaggeration is key to representing what you want you'r aduience to experience
Amazingdetail
This needs to be viewed in full size to really experience it.
I'm really amazed by your attention to detail. The scales on the "snout" of the raptor really look good. The colors as well are really interesting, and I like the sort of pattern you've made. I have no idea what the raptors really did look like, so I guess it's all right :P
The eyes are pretty impressive too, but one thing I'm not too sure about is the texture of this piece, it looks a bit smudged, and there are some lines covering it that I'm not too sure about.
I'd also like to see a proper background, jungle-style or something like that (:
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Eerily cute
Real nice design of a puppet. In spite of the simple and cartoony style, you've gone to great detail with this one. Shading and lighting are really good, with various layers of shading. The colors are simple, making the piece somewhat cold. I really like the texture you added to the clothes, and the shine off the blade of the knife, though the blood is a bit hard to make out.
Not the best ending
Part 2 of the story goes a bit more in-depth around the girl, but still stays quite shallow when it comes to story.
The same goes for the style of this one as it does with part 1. The black and white and simple, cartoony style really fits the theme, which isn't very jolly in this case. The character design also shows a tired girl, which is somewhat telling of her person.
We get to know her better, her frustrations and her feelings, which is always nice, as it pulls the reader a bit more into the story. The man is still a stranger, and the ending is quite odd, it doesn't really give you an answer to anything, and I'm not quite sure exactly what happened. I was half expecting a bit of a radical ending, something rather special happening, related to the "magic"-question of the old man.
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Interesting
With this first part of a comic, you really make the reader interested, make him/her want to read the second part of it.
Your style is good and suits the theme very well, theme is night, and the setting isn't the most cheerful there is. You don't really give a proper personality to either person in this first part, but in the second, you build somewhat of a personality around the girl, a lonely person that has basically given up on life.
The story isn't very deep either, but it's interesting because it keeps you reading on. You want to know exactly who the old man is, what he knows, and what he wants with her, creating a sort of cliffhanger to the first part.
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Cute
I must say I like your style. It's fairly simple, but you have some great shading in your pieces. And I love the abstract background of this. Not sure if it's supposed to symbolize anything, but it goes with the SS series :>
Wow
I'm really impressed with this piece. Been interesting watching how you've changed, artistically, throughout the months you've been requesting reviews.
Did you make the background as well?
The fruits look really good. Their mouths, teeth and eyes all look very cool in this style, somewhat cartoony. I can still see some lines, but you've smoothed it all out very well. The shadows are a bit unnatural, being so black, but it's easy to see where the lightsource is.
I'm also missing the "stalk" at the top of the pear and apple. They look very much like plastic, unnatural replicas, now, almost too perfect. The texture of fruit is rarely like this, flawless.
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to answer the question about the kitchen background, no i didnt make it, that is a post-render image that i edited in, i am aware of the stalk, and i will try to make any fruit in the future less shiny, i have just learned how to make a decent face texture, so expect to see another face with a maybe body :)
Not bad
Pretty decent drawing right here. You've got the shading done pretty well, though it's not entirely clear to me where the light source is at. I'm not sure about the lines on the forehead and around the collar bones, they look somewhat unnatural, as does theshadow for the nose. Also not entirely sure what the gray areas at the bottom are supposed to be. Would like to see a full character of this.
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