While this is pretty fucking hilarious, I really really think you could've done maybe a bit more with the animations? At the moment it's more like a slideshow and I could just as well be listening to a podcast, so i'd really love to see you put some more effort into the animation. I don't mind the simple style, but having the actual moving parts look more natural and fluent would sure help a bit.
You've got a great voice for this kind of short story monologue though, really enjoyed it.